Short poem is pretty shrt again. :0 Another random poem (not from an exercise.) I like this better than the last one, but it still feels a bit unfinished. I may actually return to it later.
I've noticed a pattern when I write. I rough all of my "ingredients" in a little notebook and write out a semi-final version, then type it up and re-arrange all the pieces on the computer. That... doesn't have anything to do with anything. xD I just felt like mentioning it.
Round Thirteen
Oh you are vibrant
riding on the star train
you would have me "brave
the extremes of space"
"Hubble never sleeps"
Go down to the water and
take off your shoes
create something--
"It is always doing science"
The sun strikes you
as you backstroke
___my "radioactive eye"
catches the light you threw
through you
create something
new
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How Disturbing.
It's a Gaia Journal. You know the drill. Stuff you don't care about, written by someone you don't know. :0
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Hedjrebl
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In my next life,
I want to be me,
and meet you again.