Ugh. I'm tired tonight. xP This is a weird combination of two different exercises. I've never done a pantoum before. I think my brain died, so this came out a bit strange and quite crap. Oh well. :0 (Hooray, I've reached day ten!)
Round Ten
lift the catch gently from the water now
the buzzing in the shells ashore
he was a god once you know
bitten lips and shaven heads all year
the buzzing in the shells ashore
before you understand, give chase
bitten lips and shaven heads all year
shivers to and fro with the tide
before you understand, give chase
without eyes the pearls mean nothing
shivers to and fro with the tide
bring 'em up high, bring them in
without eyes the pearls mean nothing
set your teeth against the water
bring 'em up high, bring them in
all day long the drag and the wag of tongues
set your teeth against the water
set your palms all a quiver
all day long the drag and the wag of tongues
the drag in the river so bitter
nose up the vessel to the high clouds
lift the catch gently from the water now
the talk of palms and teeth, heads all shaven
he was a god once you know
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How Disturbing.
It's a Gaia Journal. You know the drill. Stuff you don't care about, written by someone you don't know. :0
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In my next life,
I want to be me,
and meet you again.