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Sweet kisses, down my neck, chills sent down my spine...
Goosebumps arise, on my neck, this feeling, so devine...
He murmurs those two delightful words into my ears, I don't think I can hear.
As his unbearable touch sends my sensitive skin over the edge, my soft tone skin has been his. No one may give me such a warm, moist kiss that sends sparks into the dark sky.
No one can replace thing I feel... My feet sway in a way they've never done before.
I hear a rustle in the tree, and I know we're dead.
A gunshot through the tree, loud screams, and total blackness.
His glassy eyes are my last sight, as I fade from vision.
- Title: Love Me Tender
- Artist: _Estlye_
- Description: Sad poetic story that is a memory of my Aunt's. Her to-be-hubby was dead, yet she lived through the agony and pain.
- Date: 09/10/2010
- Tags: love tender
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Comments (2 Comments)
- xXxblack3starxXx - 12/08/2011
- I like it smile
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- Kechero-TheForsakenRose - 09/20/2010
- It is lovely for the first, intimate part... But it rushes through the rest withought giving much clearity. 3/5 Keep it up, darling.
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