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Brilliant light shines soft
The fragrant air blows through me
Sweet and inviting
- by cuttlefishCuIIer |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 08/08/2010 |
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- Title: Haiku #3
- Artist: cuttlefishCuIIer
- Description: Inspired by a beautiful spring morning
- Date: 08/08/2010
- Tags: haiku
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Comments (2 Comments)
- cuttlefishCuIIer - 08/17/2010
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Its not wrong
Brilliant is 2
light is 1
shines is 1
and soft is 1
your wrong - Report As Spam
- Vito321 - 08/17/2010
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haikus go 5,7,5 sylables not 7,7,5
I have a haiku just look at it u did ok though - Report As Spam
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