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The madness within
Lies deep in the soul
Where you find sin
That's out of control
It hides from the daylight
It flees from the sun
It lives in the dark night
The moon fuels its fun
It knows of no right
It lives doing wrong
The madness holds tight
To sing its death song
- by maydaymouse |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/21/2010 |
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- Title: Mad Soul
- Artist: maydaymouse
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Description:
Don't know why I titled it that, but I kinda like it. But, anyways, I wrote this in the early morning, with a foggy brain, when I was still half-asleep, so yeah. I think it came out pretty well if I do say so myself. But, anywho, I would really appreciate fair ratings and comments on this please? So enjoy, and please check out my other stuff as well if you don't mind! Thank you!
- Date: 07/21/2010
- Tags: madness sins soul control
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Comments (3 Comments)
- magic_doglover - 07/05/2011
- hm, i don't seem to have the sensibilities to understand what this one is saying, but the rhythm is much better than with the other poems of yours that i've read so far. definitely nice and basic, and from what impressions i CAN get from it, pleasantly abstract.
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- hijinxs33 - 01/14/2011
- is great 5/5
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- Ultima011 - 09/18/2010
- This one is a powerful one for me. It spells truth for so many that I know. 5/5
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