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And its just this,
Lonely old wish.
Uncovered lies,
Can't cover your eyes.
I see the tears,
Of all these years.
You're still the same,
Sitting in pain.
And I've changed so much,
Gone on with life and such.
Too bad I left you behind,
I wish the future would have been fine lined.
So where are now?
Wish I could know somehow.
And Its just this,
Lonely old wish.
And sometimes I miss,
Your old kind of bliss.
I still can't find,
One of the same kind.
Went on day to day,
Always the same way.
Love never got to you miss,
Lonely old wish.
- by Binary Rising |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/18/2010 |
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- Title: Old Wish
- Artist: Binary Rising
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Description:
I'm attempting to write a poem for the first time in awhile. Just give me some feedback, I'd appreciate it very much. This poem is sort of a memory of Red Hot Chile Pepper songs mixed with an old friend. Make sure you read the poem slowly, It has more effect that way. Enjoy.
- Date: 06/18/2010
- Tags: alone wish love missed
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Comments (3 Comments)
- ff2testjan28 - 07/19/2012
- poet
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- NitelyRain - 06/20/2010
- Very moving. Makes me think of someone I know.
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- maydaymouse - 06/18/2010
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I love it. It's well written, and flows nicely. 5/5, keep writing!^^
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