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You sit down at your keyboard,
and you just let yorself let go.
Your fingers fumble 'round for letters
to let feelings show.
But you forget something important,
and now should know
you dime a dozen, cliche emo.
Go cry, emo. Go.
If your girlfriend broke up with you,
or boyfriend cheats, y'know
there is another way, go write
some damn suicide notes.
Your lifelessness is killing me
and jading all of those
who care enough about the arts
to read what you have wrote.
I'm sure I'm not the only one
who's read what should be prose.
So let me say, for all, today,
your "poetry" just blows.
- by To-Chi VIII |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 02/11/2010 |
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- Title: Poetry? More Like...
- Artist: To-Chi VIII
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Full Title: "Poetry? More Like 'Emoetry,' amirite?"
Wrote this a little while ago. Just a disclaimer, I have no qualms with "emos." I just got pissed after reviewing poetry and lyricals on Gaia for twenty minutes, only finding morose females obsessed with ex-lovers, and guys wishing for the perfect gal (though I fall in with them...) Oh, and it's no PG poem, so keep that in mind.
BTW: I'm generally bad at conclusions, so I cut this one short to try and make up for that. - Date: 02/11/2010
- Tags: poetry emotional rant cynic pingas
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Comments (2 Comments)
- X-HayKay-X - 02/17/2012
- Too true, too true.
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- Yureiaa Hearts - 02/13/2010
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Lul.
Avoid the wanton cursing and language ('just blows').
It really takes away from the quality of your work.
Overall, interesting. 4/5 - Report As Spam