I See......

• Artist: Kizmarez
• Description: A poem for one who misses a loved one and sees them everywhere.
• Date: 02/10/2010
• Tags: love

In the sky I see you,
Oh you look wonderful in the blue

In the stars I see your bright smile,
It seems to run on for endless miles

In the streams I see your eyes,
Every time I seem to cry

In the clouds I see your beautiful hair,
I look for hours without another care

In my sleep I see your dance,
Every time it puts me in a trance

In the high grass I see you,
Oh you look beautiful too

In the church I see your image,
Never realizing it is a mirage

In the sky I see you,
Oh you look beautiful in the blue

You see that I miss you,
And I see that you miss me too.

Comments

[Kizmarez]

It was not supposed to rhyme, just sound good, for not all poems rhyme. I broke the pattern of rhyme on purpose.

[To-Chi VIII]

Your rhyming has one flaw... "Mirage" and "image" don't rhyme... I made a similar mistake when I once tried to rhyme "without a trace" and "coup de grace." : Other than that, very good and all that.