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Let the blood flow,
Let it all go,
Is death a better start?
Or is it a terrible end?
Wishing to die?
Why not stop crying?
Tears fall
And death calls.
The cuts aren't deep.
The blood
Seeps
Into the clean white clothes that I wore.
A tear rolls off my cheek.
Can you not save me from this leak?
That's when you walk in to see
The blood flow free.
Darkness surrounds me now.
The lights are going out.
As you scream for me
To return to life,
I cry.
Because I already had died
On the inside.
As you're heart breaks
Over the loss of this pathetic life,
You take the knife
And with a quick slice
There goes another life,
That was more meaningful...
More important than mine.
Your wings are stained with blood.
Your halo is dying out.
And you fall from heaven
Just to try one more time
To save this unimportant life.

- Title: Love Being Saved Part One
- Artist: BatzLove
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Description:
ok... heres an idea. if you want a happy ending comment...
if you don't comment.
tell me what you want to happen to this couple...please. - Date: 01/19/2010
- Tags: love being saved
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Comments (4 Comments)
- Th3 PrInCeEsS - 06/08/2010
- wow!deep feelings are out of this poems..This one my fav. 5/5
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- xI run with scissorsx - 04/06/2010
- both options and it was an amazing poem...and my friends say i can write! your amazing
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- toshiro sai - 03/26/2010
- wow intense. LOVE IT!
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- Jared_The Damned - 01/19/2010
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how about both?
5/5 - Report As Spam