no poems can say

• Artist: xXxKiss_Me_GoodbyexXx
• Description: this is my first poem where i actually am rhyming on purpouse, i know... its not very good, and it needs editing. i think its okay though, so... enjoy, i guess!
• Date: 11/30/2008
• Tags: poems love truth

a thousand words
cannot relate
poems and rhymes
cannot state

how many times
have i tried and
how many times
have i lied

the truth was stretched
it is not me
who just likes you
so listen to my plea

for you my dear
are the light shining
for you my love
are the silver lining

as i have said before
this poem of truth
cannot become
the equivelant of my sweet tooth
for you

Comments

[DDrox316]

I really liked this, your rhyming didn't seem like it was trying to hard, it just flowed. (:

[EmoBananasStoleMyHomework]

thank you guys soo much!!

[Inume_Senpai]

wow!!!!!!!!!!! that is soooo good! very nice indeed! good job!

[iiLil_emo_PuppeTii]

i like it... your very good! i like your writing!!

[pvtfoshisl]

I don't think it's bad....actually to be quite frank I find it very well written, I like the way you described how you feel.