Math Versus Me

• Artist: Resara
• Description: This is a poem of the struggles of my math homework. This particular piece is dedicated to geometry. Enjoy. Comments are loved.
• Date: 01/16/2010
• Tags: math versus struggles homework

Your question makes no sense,
but your answer tells no lies.
A simple yes,
or an easy no,
would do more than satisfy!

I do not care about the question,
for my answer remains the same.
I do not know.
I do not care.
You are driving me insane!

I tell you I do not understand,
still you question me again.
Just shut up
and go away.
I wish this torment would come to an end!

Everything is finished
but I still don't have a clue.
Supposedly this is this
and that is that.
But how this became that, I never knew.

Comments

[monkeyslavemaster]

It's good and easy to relate to. The meter of the poem isn't always constant, though, and takes away from the natural flow of the poem. Maybe try choosing a specific meter (iambic pentameter, trochaic trimeter, ect) if you plan on continuing poetry, and that can help keep a constant flow in your poem, and make it a little less choppy. Usually if you're going with rhyming poems, meter is usually needed.

[Orailin]

Dude...THATS AMAZING!
If you wouldn't have told me what it was about, these lyrics could have applied to anything in life!
But it does make sense for it to be about math...I know your pain...
Pre-Calc here I come...