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every single morning
i wake to the same abuse
all this hate im storing
is helping tie this noose
they never told me this
all the things ive seen
in my mind its bliss
makes me want to scream
i was promissed a pritty penny
taught me to be staunch and brittle
but i have killled so many
and helped so little
i was sent here to save
the old and the young
they told me to be brave
the first time i raised my gun
now i hear the voices
of the people i hurt
i wasnt given many choices
when i was thrown to the dirt
i was at such alarm
just me versing three
only now i no they ment me no harm
oh why did it happen to me...
- Title: war poem
- Artist: sfidd
- Description: i wrote this in my english class when i was bored lol. hope you like
- Date: 10/03/2009
- Tags: poem
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Comments (4 Comments)
- PapaxHotel - 10/07/2009
- I like it, never experienced it or anything but I can see how this can relate to some of the trauma victims I have met.
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- o0sun0o - 10/06/2009
- wahh just reading that i got tingles...you really get a feeling about whats gonna happen and whats happened. you did an awesome job at conveying the cruel realities of war. 5/5
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- sfidd - 10/04/2009
- thanks. yeh thats what i was hopeing =)
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- Kara Nami - 10/04/2009
- WOW that is amazing. but it gave me a reminder of being in the army or something, ya know how a troop might feel in their first fight??
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