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Cold blooded killers sharpen the edge of their knives
rent a car take his date for a ride,
she smiles and sighs
he smiles back at the thoughts in the back of his mind
his heart quickens because of feelings
the erotic kind
he hears her words but inside he's got her blind
sticking knives in parts of her
knives should'nt get stuck inside
After dinner and wine
at Holiday Inn
he parks and lies
"wait a minute, I'll make sure the room is right"
She smiles in sheer delight
not realizing her final time on earth is tonight
he comesout his face tight
he says get out with a voice that should fright
but she thinks she's in love and is blind to insight
The beautiful face is twisted in terror
she looks up and she sees his face in the mirror
she cries out in pain
cause she just can't beleive
she let this man killing her so near her
"he was charming, hi opened my door
he wined me and dined me
now he's torturing me with galore
as he got off six times the poor victim faded
she remembers her past when her mind has shaded
and she goes to a time when she was at her best
cause her body stops functioning and now she's at rest
He looks at her figure
her perfect small frame
he pulls out his knife
and thinks " it's such a shame"
she could have been taken home to mother
He chops off the left arm of his former lover
two years he had waited
he was glad that he did
because none of the others had felt as good as this!
- by Dasexiestswag |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 09/11/2009 |
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- Title: Sad Truth
- Artist: Dasexiestswag
- Description: A poem that I wrote about two years ago about a misguided woman.
- Date: 09/11/2009
- Tags: truth love woman mother
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Kiokah - 05/10/2010
- Thats awesome, but I agree with them two, But you still get a 5/5 ^_^
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- Tweeny Bird - 12/01/2009
- it was good but iBrightScales_ was right. you used in correct words and i had to reread some lines for me to get what it was saying. but i was really good. Plz read my new poem regret!. =D
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- iBrightScales - 09/12/2009
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There are some parts of this poem that don't exactly make sense, and some words are used incorrectly. If it hadn't been for that, it would have been a good poem.
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