This whisper in my mind

• Artist: hadezs7
• Description: Felt like writing somehting on the spot since i feel down. Please leave comments.
• Date: 07/06/2009
• Tags: whisper mind

I hear these whispers in my head
I close my eyes because each one I dread
I hate the words they say
Wanting me to take my life
Wanting me to leave this strife
They want no one to know
How I truly feel

But no matter how bad it becomes
I want to listen to them all
End my life just to leave my strife
Leave everyone behind
For I know no one will shead a single tear
For all my fears
For all my bravado
I am truly afraid
Alone and lost in this world
I have lost my place......

Comments

[Emma M Hunnycut]

That was good, but... look. Emo thoughts are not fun! It you wanna cry so bad, then go watch a chick flick; not beat yourself up with stupid things that aren't true!!

[the_ashen_child]

it suck that you have to feel that way. it sucks that anyone has to feel hat way. it's a very good poem though

[Kind-Snowy-Bloody-rose]

wwo there is very strong emotions and the words are sooo very well put together. I realy liked it

[prisoner_2_society]

i love the way it sounds. i feel the same way sometimes and i write to but none of my poems have come out like this. this is oober awsome