My Heart

• Artist: jkdaivjkle_kjeai
• Description: I was just sitting in bed and decided to write a poem. I've been feeling a lot lately and have been very confused. But this came to me so I decided to write my thoughts down and here's what I wrote.
• Date: 05/01/2009
• Tags: heart broken shattered

My heart pumps the blood throughout my body.
Beating viciously for you, only you.
My passion overwhelming it, the love so strong.

My heart is broken.
Drops of blood crying to the ground,
aching at every single drop.

My heart is shattered.
Being dropped from up high,
slamming into the ground.
Pieces flying in opposite directions.

My heart lays in a desolate place where none but only the brave dare to walk.

Comments

[Kiyene]

try and make it a little more, uh, how do i say it....uhm...vague? well, it just sounds too, uh, not sientific, but u get wat im saying ritee? i luv the concept tho!

[Surliat]

I liked it. It was a little dark.