New Moon Night

• Artist: havishanta
• Description: Alright, so this isn't too bad, in my opinion. The rhyming pattern changes, but I separated it fairly well, and it has it's own sort of flow, you know?
  
  Anyway, about one of my first heartbreaks. Wrote it like, a year back. Kind of depressing, but hey, look at the title. Haha. : D
  
  Anywho, hope you like it! Leave me comments. Rate. And I want your suggestions!!! : DDD
• Date: 07/04/2009
• Tags: moon night depressing dark heartbreak

Blanketed in darkness
This new moon night
A goddess tells me to sleep
Away the day’s fright
The night stretches on
A roll of endless string
Surrounded by twisted beauty
Where no angel could sing

He’s gone
He’s left
I’m far far behind
I’m crushed
I’m dead
There goes the chime
It’s morning!
It’s morning!
Such a bitter-sweet light!
But no sun’s rays
Bring an end to my night.

He’s gone
He’s left
Not much to do
I’m crushed
I’m dead
Nothing is new

Noise is a buzz
Sight is a fuzz
Touch is like smoke
Life is a joke

All light is lost
On this new moon night
There’s nothing to see
Without any sight
Let the blackness move in
There’s no sense to fight it
The way shapes disfigure
As messed as a riot

Things twist and turn
I have grace unearned
As the disfigured figures
Place my hand on the trigger

For on this new moon night
Darkness makes way
For I have suffered such loss
It has to obey

He’s gone
He’s left
I’m crushed
I’m dead
Yet in all my dread
My whole life on a thread
Everyone else towards the light
On this new moon night.

Comments

[havishanta]

Haha! I didn't MAKE it for the book, lol, but now that you mention it, it kinda does! ^^; How ironic! : D

[Shadowashes]

Wow, it actually fits the book. It's really good.