are lifes only law

• Artist: hippiegypsyAZ
• Description: the law that is never broken.
  please don't critazize and i dont have spell check.
  the poem means you rather live life and let death catch up to you or worry about dieing and never truely live.
• Date: 03/13/2009
• Tags: lifes only

There is allways a law that can not be broken,
the law of light and darkness,
many do not know this law,
nor do they know they fallow it,
yet, we all fallow it blindely,
so simple but hard to under stand,
thouse who run away from darkness never are happy,
simple because they dont want to be sad,
and thouse who chace after the light will later be consomed by the dark.

Comments

[hippiegypsyAZ]

I DONT HAVE FLIPPIN SPELL CHCK ALL READY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[Mango_Chey]

i dont agree...i can completley understand every word...good job!i love it^^

[onionio]

Alright, so first of all, it's always (one l) follow, blindly, understand is one word, it's spelled those, simply needs the y, chase (with an s) and consumed. Please spell check your pieces before submitting because it's hard to decipher written work when the reader has no idea what word you're trying to use. But aside from the spelling I like your idea and metaphors. : )