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As I walk in the night
A very odd sight
Rose-red eyes
Against grey skies
Not a step I take
For my own sake
With a sight like cold steel
An odd feeling I feel
My heart beats faster
This'll end in disaster
My blood draws her presence
A dangerous essence
A feline grace
An angelic face
As she draws near
I lose all fear
She hugs me close
A throat exposed
Without a sound
A colourful crimson flows down
Im out of breath
Dancing with this girl on the verge of death
- by AceOfTheHeart |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/04/2009 |
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- Title: My Blood Draws Her Prescence
- Artist: AceOfTheHeart
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- Date: 07/04/2009
- Tags: blood vampire
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Comments (1 Comments)
- Vicious Hyperbolizer - 07/06/2009
- mediocre. The rhyme is forced, at times improper. The subject, nothing new. To do a vampire story (in poem form or otherwise), because the topic is so popular now, it has to be superb, flawless, or it falls flat.
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