falling

• Artist: KiLLiNg-M3-SoftLy
• Description:
• Date: 05/24/2009
• Tags: falling hurt pain gothic

I glance beyond the horizon, to look upon what might be my last glimpse of light,
I stare beyond the darkness, hoping to find a way out of the curse i have been blessed with,
i stand defeated and alone, as i fall from grace. no body can save me, they have already pushed me off the cliff, my tears wont help the fact that i will soon meet my demise, my screams are not heard, silenced by the sounds of laughter, as i plummet to my doom .

Comments

[Mugentsuki]

A curse is not a blessing if you seek to rid yourself of it. Other than that, I understand the rulelessness of free verse, but this isn't much of a poem, it sounds more like an excerpt of a book.

[Airrested]

Beautiful i love it. I feel as if the same fate is coming upon myself as well tho. . .