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You picked me up
you let me go
but where i landed...
I dunno
im cold/im hungry
you left my side
you came and left
quicker than the tide
alone and in the dark
thats where ill be
you just dont care
whats happens to me
i thought you listened
when i shed a tear
I thought you cared
but you lived off fear
when my fear left
you went right along
now stand and listen
to lifes sad song
I dunno
why i tried so hard
i flew with with wings
but landed hard
I dunno
why Im alive
why I struggle
to survive
All I know
is that i hate you
I hate, hated, will hate
everything you do
just walk away
go down that road
down to wear
no one has trode
when i laughed
with the rythm of love
it was shot down
like a hunter and a dove
flew up high
and fell straight down
i hate this thing
that ive found
I. hate. love.
- by Kaira Angel |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/13/2009 |
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- Title: I hate love
- Artist: Kaira Angel
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Description:
If you didnt get the poem---here is an explanation.
SO this girl loved a guy, but he left and now she's depressed
all there is to it. ~^^~ hope you like it! (plz rate and comment fairly!) - Date: 04/13/2009
- Tags: hate love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- x-G-Angel-x - 04/15/2009
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I love yer poems Kaira!!!!!!!!!!!!!
*sobs more*
STORY OF MY LIFE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
UR POEMS ARE AMAZING/INTOXICATING!!!!!!!!!!
Yes pple TRODE is a real word xDD - Report As Spam
- Jarmis - 04/13/2009
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Well... an easier word might have been strode, but I get what you meant. wink
It's really pretty good, you managed to take very short lines and pack them full to bursting with emotion. Good job biggrin - Report As Spam
- Kaira Angel - 04/13/2009
- trode means walk...lol
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- UC Poika - 04/13/2009
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Lots of emotion
nice rhythm
is trode a word
or did you make it up - Report As Spam