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I've broken down,
beyond repair.
Forcefully bound,
my heart a flare.
You've chosen to,
stay at my side.
With love that grew,
and time to bide.
I will now share,
my life with you
With love and care,
memories to.

- Title: Memories
- Artist: Drasul
- Description: I wrote this poem; a few days ago. Posted it in a thread and heard good word about it [from my friends] so I thought "Hey, might as well.." right? Well, tell me what you think please ^_^
- Date: 04/12/2009
- Tags: memories
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Anomalous Disposition - 01/08/2011
- Interesting
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- lilandrez - 04/13/2009
- wow, it is a simple poem
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- Monster Sobedidal1337 - 04/13/2009
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- Drasul - 04/12/2009
- Thanks blaugh I like to write, I'm thinking of majoring in writing ^_^
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- analiyah - 04/12/2009
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That a very nice, simple poem.
Didn't know you wrote poems.
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