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those who are slowly dying and are unaware only feel halve the pain that the people who know they are dying fast or slow
that is until that person has died
the pain of someone elses death destroys us
but when we die the lives we crush is an ironic vengeance of how we were crushed
the only pains from death is pain from regrets
regretting that you weren't nice to that person
that you didn't spend time with them
but the truth is these regrets shall bring us closer to that person
and as we die we shall drift away from the living as they drift closer to us and we come even closer to the people that died in our lives
we shall even grow closer to the dead we didn't know or bother to know
only the people who are separated and know death feel no pain no regrets
- by Oldies Fan13 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 04/03/2009 |
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- Title: the slowly dying
- Artist: Oldies Fan13
- Description: this is the second poem I wrote after my cousin died about how I see death. And please COMMENT I would LOVE to hear your opinions.
- Date: 04/03/2009
- Tags: slowly dying
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Sweet alexisthebest - 04/11/2009
- i loved it. its amazing!!!!
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- pandagirl_458 - 04/09/2009
- wow...that was really touching and true
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