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The floor has fallen through,
and now the walls are ebbing.
The roof is no more in this place,
Or were these ever real?
I fear naught;
All these fairytales can’t be true:
shows of grandeur and lies,
are intertwined with beliefs
so rooted in minds that close
to all other words in the world.
And if these verses are bad,
will you stone me as well?
I’d rather left for dead
than hang my head among owls,
whose moans and cries and tears
of such whimsical fury
and folly, fruitless measures.
will surely be their timeless end.
No, we’ll turn my verses to demons.
and let them soar among the birds
stealing prey and friend alike
simply to consume, only to consume
without rhyme or reason
only kept in an imperfect time.
But surely my demons will value
all the glories they have swallowed
Surely they will remember
these verses that made them whole
So smiles will return to us.
and you and I, we’ll find paths again.
Cut from blood and littered earth
but roads less traveled still.
- by The Secretive Ninja |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 03/26/2009 |
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- Title: The Night Owls
- Artist: The Secretive Ninja
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I literally wrote this ten minutes ago, and I'm dying for some feedback! Please, please please tell me what you think, or what I could do to improve!
<3 - Date: 03/26/2009
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- Salornix - 03/27/2009
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It could use a little grammar and spelling correction, but other than that, I think it's cool 4/5
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