Broken Smile

• Artist: Charm Sapphire
• Description: Sumthing dat hit me hard wen I waz feelin dispondent
• Date: 03/24/2009
• Tags: broken smile

See this smile on my face,
theres nothing but disgrace,
absolutely no grace.
Its a smile with no emotion,
a smile as troubled as the ocean.
My anger inside begins to pile,
hidden behind this broken smile.

The joy of my smile is not internal,
but the sadness I feel is eternal.
I smile at you with no courage,
Im afraid you might see my hidden rage,
the rage that has me locked up in a cage.
And so I smile this broken smile,
a smile dat is so not worthwhile.

Although I smile and I wave,
the unrealness of it is my grave,
I love the darkness of my pitiful cave.
For my cave is hidden,
its my own dark garden of Eden.
For once I wish I could have a genuine smile,
but no thats not my style.

Sorrow and pain, now thats me.
Anger and anguish, thats who I'll always be.
Departure from this world, thats what I want.
Displeasure and pain, thats my life stunt.
LORD help me break free from this hated smile, this disgraceful smile, displeasing smile.
This broken smile, this smile, this SMILE, this so not worthwhile, broken smile.....

Comments

[Charm Sapphire]

Oh and LeeLee I'll post some more right away

[Charm Sapphire]

Well I've edited it according to the Poetic Expressions Law you've been telling me to use. Thanx for the feedback

[maydaymouse]

it was really good, very emotional, just work on the spelling...5/5

[Hyper_Kid_2009]

good.. 4/5

[LeeLeePyon]

luv the peom write some more please!!!

[deeanna1212]

hmm.. you should be careful with spelling, or lingo, especially those with the letter 'z'... and avoid using numbers such as 1, 2, 3,.. but use one, two, three,... Other than that.. it's a good theme,, and a great poem..