Fallen love

• Artist: FullMoon_NekoxX
• Description:
• Date: 02/27/2009
• Tags: love

Nothing...is that something you feel when ur all alone?
Nothing...its all she feels
She feels that if she smiles her whole face will fall apart
She feels that if she lets anyone to close that they'll rip her heart
out
She knows....with all her heart that she will never be loved!
She knows that when everyone is happy that she'll be the alone one that watches them all.
As they walk by with their smiles...
She wishes she can smile like that.....!!!
WHY?!!! Why do they get to be happy?
I want to be happy to!!!
Its no fair....! Its no fair!!
AS she waits, and waits, and waits...
She finally felt what she all ways felt...
Her tears as they fell down her cheeks..and
she fell to sleep..never to awaken.
But no one will notice anyway..
thats my fallen love!!!

Comments

[violet kushina]

ur talent is good but u r not fluent in English right??overall.. it's nice.. keep improving.love to see more writing from u..^^...

[i_love_vampys]

wonderful wrighting

[FullMoon_NekoxX]

thank you xi, but its ok Cloffing ill improve on my writing skills. thanks you to for ur comments! biggrin DD

[xi will always love youx]

Guess what, person below me, it does not! It's someone's emotions. And you should know enough to respect that! I think its really good. Sorry about the rude person.

[Cloffing Pempslider]

Guess what? It sucks!