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The words of my brothers are jumbled
Something about the stagnant air of a coffee shop chokes each consanant
and stops each syllable in its tracks
I guess chai lattes cant cultivate conversation under caffinated corruption
boiling beans burst from the heat and the language of machines rings
they sing of things unhealthy, but craved
But the words can be saved
Through mumbles and mutters, vowels run down the gutters
and spin with spitle to spawn statistics of society
The cars beyond the tinted windows whisper shadows of lyric
With thudding bass tracks shaking and shuddering the caramel macciato in my neighbor's cup
and his words fall in rythm with the drone of the white noise
talk of sports cars and politics
and the DOW midset creeps atop their tounges
like the smoke from my latest nicotine fix.
They keep on jabbering but somewhere between bikini cuties and Vivanno Smoothies,
the subastance of their speech falters
and in this tranquil transistor radio of static and phychic hotlines,
I find it hard to hold down my 3 dollar cheese danish with the smell of bullshit in my nostrils
It's like Hollywood in my local Starbucks.
And Panera Bread is Paris Hilton's mansion
(cuz it's filled with ignorant bitches)
it itches at me to think that the art of language has died
in the whipped cream of a Frappaccino
and their stupidity is drizzled in chocolate,
with crushed caramel candies and rainbow spinkles on top.
Different dialects debate disturbing demonstarations of diatribes
against diralects and dead men
and too often are these corrosive forked tounges overlooked
and even accompanied in their assualts
I remember when words changed the world.
When Kings dreamed of kinder things
and "the only thing we had to fear was fear itself"
So it's no wonder great men use teleprompters today,
lest their good intentions be split like the human genome
and mutated into the grotesque beast that our nation has already evolved into
because in everyday situations in a coffee shop,
superficial talk starts to stalk tragedy with idiotic idioms laced into subpar articulation
that is only a ghost of the English language
Accents interchange with sounds of slang and sarcasm
to climax into an illegitament love child that is colloquialism at it's finest
and the child provokes pety palaver until the walls collapse
and make way for those of us with the gift of Gab
If we can sift through the hillbilly jargon
maybe we can rebulid each Carribou Coffee Hut into our own holy lexicon
where we serve each customer a thesaurus instead of a Tazo Tea
and the Pike's Place Roasts will be roasted and replaced with stacks of dictionaries
because intelligence has become quite contrary to popular belief
beneath esppresso beans
So every unfairly traded bag will be replaced
with a poem that tells of our ever growing impatience
and every artifical flavor pump will be replaced
with poem about how the cancer in our bowls is growing
and each sugar cube will be dissolved
and we'll write about how we can taste the diabetes in our cavities
So maybe someone will see these and give a damn
and pick up a book instead of a laptop
and instead of "wassup?" they'll say "How was your day?"
And maybe me can finally say something other than just "fine"
and not say what's on our mind,
but explain what's in our brains
and gain
a word in edgewise
instead of just ordering a drink
I hope this made you think
- by SilvertongueSagittarius |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 06/07/2010 |
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- Title: Coffee Shop
- Artist: SilvertongueSagittarius
- Description: I wrote this for a Speakeasy. (A chill poetry open mic with a general theme and teachings inbetween poems.) The theme is language. I wrote it sitting in a Starbucks. lol.
- Date: 06/07/2010
- Tags: coffee shop
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Echo Ligeia - 08/20/2010
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*mock surprise* What, you wrote it in a Starbucks? Really? XD
This is an excellent medium for communicating your message. If you had said to me "I was upset with the common abuse of language, so I wrote a poem about it" you would have already won me over. It's the greatest mockery. ^^
The effect is increased by the amount of alliteration, which borders on excessive. And the image of the 'replacement' at the end was quite affecting. Good work. - Report As Spam
- lucky_chan1789 - 07/13/2010
- pretty good. i like the concept and everything
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