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The world goes on without me
As far as I can tell.
It goes faster than I can see.
It is like I am in Hell.
The world goes on without me
And I am forced to watch.
As people are torn from sight
Whose souls I try to catch.
The world goes on without me
Like sand in an hourglass.
The sand will soon run out
And death will come at last.
- by TribesmanGaming |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/31/2008 |
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- Title: Time Goes on Without Me
- Artist: TribesmanGaming
- Description: This is basically about a person who life seems to stand still while the world flies by. This is sometimes what it seems like, the world leaving you behind. Sorry about lines 6 & 8. It is an approximate rhyme.
- Date: 12/31/2008
- Tags: time goes without
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Comments (5 Comments)
- Walker23001 - 11/26/2011
- that is just amazing man.
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- iResell - 01/13/2009
- I think that the fact that 3/12 of the poem are the same line kind of throws it's flow off...... although it's your title you should ever have 1/4 of you poem be the exact same line.
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- TribesmanGaming - 01/02/2009
- Thank you. Thank you. I never thought the reactions would be like this. Maybe I should write more...
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- Sasuke-Kuuun - 01/02/2009
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Dude!!!!
stunning, that was by far one of the best i've read so far...out of like 10 that i've rated - Report As Spam
- Tsunami From Hell - 12/31/2008
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wow its perfect!!!
the 6 and 8 line were wonderful! doesnt matter if you cant find the exact words!
really meanful poem 5/5 biggrin - Report As Spam
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