Hiding

• Artist: SteveNash13rox
• Description: Not my best poem ever.....
• Date: 12/23/2008
• Tags: hiding

Hiding

I am hiding from the world,
From sorrow and dispair,
The wars, and the fighting,
We all know should end.


I am hiding from love,
The heartbreaks and feelings,
The enregy and mistakes,
All that time that could be wasted.

They tell me to take risks,
But I never listen,
One day I will,
And my life will glisten.

Comments

[Harness]

very nice. :3

[SteveNash13rox]

Yeah I thought it was weak to. I will follow your advice in my future writing.Thanks!

[NakedJack]

Hardly good at all, such a week ending. Try sitting on a poem for a day or so then reread it. The mistakes should be obvious, or weakness in writing.....