killed

• Artist: zxjean
• Description: free me, because i hate you
  but i can't because i love you
• Date: 03/06/2009
• Tags: killed

all are quiet now, no more crying
no more tears, only doomed in dying
no more hearts to break by pain
for only emptiness i gain

no more razorblades tears to cry
my eyes have already gone dry
no more hearts to be broken
buried in the grave and time frozen

i was happy before but now i am not
only happy for i will be in the dead's lot
alone in darkness i stay
"take my rubbish life" i say

bruised and battered, my heart is
i let you do it but i don't deserve this
i let you hurt me because i love you
let you kill me in all things you do


end my cruel life, and suffering heart
it is scratched, wounded, and torn apart
you are killing me everyday you love me
i can't get over you, i could never be free

Comments

[Unwary Wanderer]

Not exactly superior verse, but you did make a good attempt. The subject is a tad too common, though. Like to see something different.

[Thorn Of The Sky]

This was really really good. Appareantly (so my friends say)I write to much poetry like this so I know some when I see it and this is very good.