Poem for Auguste

• Artist: akurei kyousuke
• Description: this was inspired by a book i read, called Terminal Games.
  
  i know its not a good poem, but hey, why not give it a shot
• Date: 12/19/2008
• Tags: poem auguste

Whimsical being
show me your face
ever deceiving
you inhabit no place

always walking
never sleeping
never talking
always creeping

haunting my dreams
draining my life
you've created a world
so filled with strife

as I sit here today
empty and inert
you're compelled to go about
causing much hurt

I was but the first
of many to come
I hope to stop the worst
though I'm slowly becoming numb

I've lost my will
you've taken my mind
I hope you're very happy
and quite satisfied

Comments

[Leprosy Breakdance]

The rhymes do seem a little forced, but it's still an admirable 4/5, which is a better rating than most of my poems.

[B-B-B-BeanCup]

don't waste the taste don't force the rhyme

[A Taste of Fate]

i actually thought it was good. i liked it...