Your Smell

• Artist: cupcake_ninja08
• Description: Okay this is an Inuyasha fan-fic poem, about is first encounter with Kagome, it was when he was complaining about her smell, because she smelled like Kikyo at first, but when she got closer, she smelled somewhat different, here is what was going in Inuyasha's mind at that moment! Please rate and comment!
• Date: 07/28/2008
• Tags: inuyasha fanfic poem

It simple matter, why I hate the fact that you live,
your a memory of something that should never been!
I can smell your blood from here, why do I feel that you are not who you say you are.

There is this feeling deep inside of me. Why did you captivate me.
Is it because I am full of regret from the past,
Why didn't our love last.

You killed me when I broke your heart, and now your saving me,
after all the pain I gave to you, you don't mind that your,
heart was snapped in two.

Why can't I see, why can't I feel what I want to feel, you make me hate you,
but why can't I love you. Is it because your blood smells so familiar to me, but your scent is a different story.

Now I am stuck with you, and this other one, who haunts mind,
now is all up to time, why did I have to hate you, when all you did was
love me, even when the past let go of you.

Comments

[cupcake_ninja08]

okay, thanks for the advice I will remember that the next time!

[wander my friend]

well i think that it is an amazing peice and if you just move around some words you could reach a larger audeince, and i advise you to start a new line at every comma.

[cupcake_ninja08]

oh I read the manga, and I am a huge fan of the show, I was just writing what he would feel at the time, but thanks for the comment!

[Flyleaf Loverx100]

wow,very good.i found some things missing,but it's ok,you can still hint the beat,and it tells a story,even if you haven't read the manga,you can still tell what happened in the books.