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Delicious porridge , steaming hot
Some fresh coffee in the pot
The table beautifully laid
A place for you , one for dad
Another for your little lad
Father shouted"Oh my , gee whizz!
Oh dear , how hot this porridge is,"
"Lets take a stroll along the street
Until it is cool enough to eat
A nice little walk , a little stroll
Is good for people on the whole."
No living wife would dare to question
Such a sensible suggestion.
No sooner you look down the road
You spy no-other than Goldilocks, that little toad
That nosey thieving little louse
Comes sneaking into your deserted house!!
The delcious food upon the table placed with upmost care
Made the daring thief glare
Upon the table adorned with goods
Whilst glaring back to the woods
She took a gulp of the treats
She hated the first one , it wasnt that sweet
She tasted the second bowl , not much of a feat
The third bowl she found a delectible treat.
Her full stomach made her weary
She mumbled "Oh gosh , Oh dearie"
She stumbled over the wooden floor
Over to one of the three chairs by the door
The first she sat on made her bottom sore
The second chair she sat on was lumpy
The third chair was just right - Until the legs broke which left her oh-so grumpy.
Glaring at the ridgid stairs with her tired eyes she thought 'I guess i'll go rest up there'
Her black shoes tapping on the wooden stairs;
Her eyes wandering else where
Sleeping thoughts through her head
Whilst she threw her self on the nearest bed.
The first bed she tried she found too hard
The second bed she tried was too soft
The third bed she tried she found just right and tucked herself in oh-so tight.
The three bears then returned home from a nice little stroll
To soon find out that in their bowls
There was not a single scrap of food left for one person to eat
The three bears found this not much of a treat
Stomping all the way over to the chairs
Papa bear looked down and started to stare
Then he announced "Someone has been sitting in MY chair!"
Mama bear glanced down at her chair and squealed "Someones been sitting in my chair too!"
Tears swelled up in Baby bears eyes as he squeaked "Someones been sitting in my chair too , and the fat lump has broken it in two!!"
Glaring behind him , back at the stairs
Papa bear then decided to declare
"I think that some-ones sleeping up there..."
His padded feet glided up the stairs
Pushing the door open, he began to stare
At the figure lying there
Papa bear declared "I Think i've found SOMEONE else to eat..."
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And that was the end of Goldilocks
- Title: Goldilocks And The Three Bears
- Artist: iSkit
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Description:
This is my own version of goldilocks and the three bears , in a poem or rhyme.
I had to make this for an English Assignment, so I hope you like it. - Date: 12/17/2008
- Tags: version goldilocksthreebears assignment rhyme poem
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Comments (4 Comments)
- panada0746 - 02/21/2009
- that was awesome n i like the part where Goldilocks was eaten.
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- AUDREYxMULE - 12/21/2008
- awww this is so cute you should make children's books someday!!! and make big money biggrin
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- iSkit - 12/17/2008
- Thanks ezzy ^^
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- lnfatuated - 12/17/2008
- Awesome. <3
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