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Darkness and sorrow abound and i'm swallowed by a sea of emotions. Remembering back to the times when things were simple, those days long past and missed.
I search in the darknes for my way, a light, and anchor, as i stand alone in a sea of company, empty...
I think of her, the beacon in the night, and may see my path in the darkness
I struggle to reach her, amidst all obsticles, and fall to the ground, cut down by the logic which is my own.
I lay in agony, at the reality which is mine, sitting in my room alone.
- by ksamjr0036 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 12/10/2008 |
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- Title: my reality
- Artist: ksamjr0036
- Description: i just wrote it, its my first entry ever in the arenas, if you dont like it thats fine. and if ur looking for happy and uplifting, this is not a piece for you. comment and rate, i dont get feedback on my work very often
- Date: 12/10/2008
- Tags: reality
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Comments (7 Comments)
- JudithMarie - 12/29/2008
- wow. this is VERY good. i like it a lot. biggrin good job!
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- oO_Snow Wing_Oo - 12/13/2008
- for the first time I gave u 5/5 4laugh
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- Bewitched Moon - 12/13/2008
- awesome writing smile
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- Prowny returns - 12/12/2008
- Un diez para ti bonita <3
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- Warlonx - 12/11/2008
- it is a nice poem...better than anything i can write.
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- BlazingStarX87 - 12/11/2008
- for submitting it it would probably be a good idea to have spelling and grammar correct... it kind of distracts from the words when things look like that. however, aside from that it is very well written and very descriptive. Well done smile
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- Bio Eclipse - 12/11/2008
- I like it..really nice
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