This Feeling I Feel

• Artist: OuEstLaCraie
• Description: A trio of triolets for you!
• Date: 12/04/2008
• Tags: feeling feel love

I think it’s love,
This feeling I feel.
I’m free as a dove!
I think it’s love.
An emotion above,
Yet entirely real.
I think it’s love,
This feeling I feel.

I think it’s love,
This feeling I feel.
But is my love enough?
I think it’s love...
Can we rise above?
Are we stronger than steel?
I think it’s love,
This feeling I feel.

I think it was love,
That feeling I felt.
Pure as the feathered dove,
I think it was love.
Insubstantial fluff
Made my heart melt.
I think it was love,
That feeling I felt.

Comments

[PR1NC3SS T1G3R]

Sweet.

[OuEstLaCraie]

That's the point--the questions are how naive about love is the author, and was what they felt really love? Thus, "I think it's love"; it's uncertainty, a new experience the narrator can't quite describe or put a name on.

But thank you for the comment : ]

[Only Becca]

Nicely written and well composed, but I'm not fond of the subject matter. I don't think it's right to portray real love as something as fleeting as this. Insubstantial fluff is right. 4/5 anyway, for good composition.