The child who wanted love

• Artist: Orspazzm
• Description: A made up story about a poor boys drunken father, and his mother who left. Please enjoy. And please vote fairly, this is my first entry. Hope for good feedback!
• Date: 12/03/2008
• Tags: poor

When he goes to school
No one asks why
How did he get that swollen black eye?

He is forced to lie
He is forced not to cry
He is forced to never tell why

He is happy at school
But when he goes home
He is never happy

When he gets home
He tries to run

He runs to his room
Only to be caught
By his father who he unfortuneatly loves alot

He starts to cry
He starts to scream
But no one can hear him
As loud as he seems

He may be good
He may be bad
But whatever he is he doesnt deserve his dad

He's evil
He's cruel
He's monsterous too

And all the kid wants is love

This sad tale ends
With a horrible beating
In which was his last

But now this boy is happy and glad
In a much better place
Where his bruses have healed
And his beatings are nothing but a memmory

But one last memmory just cant leave him
Why had his mother left?

THE END?

Comments

[Freya Iwa]

it reminds me of me my mother and my step-dad.....T.T very nice 5/5

[Aya-Whitewater]

thats good can u read mine. id like ur input on wat u think 5/5

[Kiss-Like-Morphine]

good job..

[exohh_cinnamonbuns]

good job.
that kinda reminded me of a book
A Child Called "it"
its really sad.
its about a boy whos mother beats him.