Tears of Solom

• Artist: Lilac_Luna445
• Description: Just another poem I wrote because I felt like this at the time.
  Note:The best way to write poetry (in my opinion) is to write about how you feel at the moment. Write about how you feel. Like if your sad, you can write about sadness, and how the pain wells up inside you or something. If your happy, write about the joy in life, or about something that makes you happy, like chocolate. Lol. Try expressing what you feel inside. That's my opinion of what poetry really is. Its what comes from inside.
• Date: 11/28/2008
• Tags: tears solom

With every tear I shed,
A fragment of my soul is lost.
With every tear I shed,
My soul will turn to frost.

The tears roll down my face,
As I silently cry for you.
The tears roll down my face,
It all just feels so new.

My soul is slowly slipping,
Im losing who I am.
My soul is slowly slipping,
Into the darkness of the damned.

Why cant the tears stop falling,
I do not want the pain.
Why cant the tears stop falling,
As I stare up at the rain.

As I sing this solom song of dispare,
The tears fall even harder.
As I sing this solom song of dispare,
The pain grows even larger.

I love you so much,
I wish that you would see it.
I love you so much,
Your place in my heart will always fit.

Comments

[I NUPPOO I]

preety cool 5/5

[iChemical-kiss]

I like it, its just like me, always being so sensative, but it is like real life 5/5

[Lilac_Luna445]

Thanks. ^^ It describes my life too.

[Little Miss Cupcakes]

honey, this may jes be another poem.. but it sherr as hell describes my life pretty damn well!!!
5/5
good job!