night sky

• Artist: robinprewitt
• Description: an improvised polm inspierd by my giaia fravroits message
  Both your idols and favorites are as empty and lifeless as the moon.
• Date: 09/05/2008
• Tags: moon stars night

The moon is all and is not
Calm and quite
Always moving without thought
How the stars sit beside it
So far away they lie
Simply staring
But why
Are they watching?
Maybe their looking for a little owl?
Or searching for a tiny bat?
Maybe their faces simply scowl
How I wonder if the moon would chat
"Did you see the cat in the yard?"
It asks, knowing no answer to be found
Because distance stops all sound
Even for this lonely bard.

Comments

[Victor Knight]

it's good but you change rhyme schemes a few times and you have issues with spelling but other than that i really like it. good imagery

[Frey Yue]

It would be a much greater and more whimsical poem if the spelling was correct. However, props for the concept. 3/5

[the_ashen_child]

oh my word!
i love it!
that's so cool!