Perfect Order

• Artist: Epic Kittehsaurus
• Description: PLEASE READ THIS DESCRIPTION...
  
  This is a bit of a confusing poem because it was a cutout poem. You took 50 (or maybe it was 60...IDK) random words off of a piece of paper, then glued them together. It's only for those of you who are brave souls and would be willing to give the time to scrap together a good comment on it ^_^
  
• Date: 06/16/2009
• Tags: perfect order

Perfect Order

The green love dance before sunny tonight
were sour teardrop pools.
The dream boat has eat sweet right as rain
Delicious pool beans
A cold worm near Wichita.
"Go try our balloon friend magic," said Ed.
"Ride the school moon in your sleep."
They whisper treat true soon
This old yellow sound makes you funny
Carry his blue, does these drank are so mine?
If I was here, hello to Maryland from only today.

I took you some away from her.

Comments

[Epic Kittehsaurus]

Well, Nerada, you're close...

you need to think "above" smile if you catch what I'm saying.

[arisenfey111]

Its about magic, crazy magic.
But I like it its different. Something unexpected.

[Epic Kittehsaurus]

Cool smile I am glad.
You are very close...it has to do with the sky XD

[Onyx12345--twilight241]

its a dream. a mixed up dream.

[Onyx12345--twilight241]

I didn't make sencs but at the same time, made perfect sens to a writer. I am going to be a writer and that was true insparashion to me.

[Epic Kittehsaurus]

BTW - If you want to guess the real meaning of this poem, comment and I'll PM you if you're right xD