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My heart.
My heartshaped flesh,
My loving pump,
My source of life,
My feelings' fortress.
You broke it.
You laughed at me,
You mocked my words,
You demolished my hope,
You distinguished my feelings.
She undid your work.
She gathered the pieces,
She reworked my passion,
She created a meaning,
She answered "Yes" at the question.
We created a home.
We shared our spirits,
We shared our pain,
We shared the world,
And it was never in vain.
Because you have to be two,
for love to gain...
- by Darkeydance |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/16/2008 |
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- Title: A lover's tale
- Artist: Darkeydance
- Description: A poem i wrote cus i wanted to try, see what people thought about it. If you don't like it, please tell me what you do not like, and if you like it, please tell me what you DO like. Thanks for the constructive critism!
- Date: 07/16/2008
- Tags: love
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Comments (5 Comments)
- tHe PuPpEt MaStEr toshi - 12/27/2008
- it's okay..... i don't really get the last two parts. the first parts was excellent.
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- Casca 7 - 07/16/2008
- your style needs a little work.
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- John Marston 1901 - 07/16/2008
- its....yeah dont quit your day job
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- lovermikey - 07/16/2008
- great work
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- a z n p a n d ii - 07/16/2008
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Cool. ;]
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