living lies

• Artist: unknow virus sis
• Description: a girl that feel that life sucks and hopes to find something better on the other side of the raindow
  
  i got board so dont think im emo or depressed or sucidal IM NOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
• Date: 07/04/2009
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my world is cold
eveything a lie
am i nothing in ur eyes???
seeing the truth that was nothing but lies
having been hurt
my heart has shattered
my life has died
i lost all hope
living was a lie
till the day i died
now there is nothing left to go by
nothing
now this is good-bye
hope to eye u on the other side

Comments

[darkrose1219]

needs more work, kinda tired of death poems but 4/5

[Hekibel]

I will admit, I've read plenty of death/sadness/wanting poems. Your poem used too much chatspeak, which lowered the quality of the piece.

[clickheretowinprize]

I feel like I'm getting bored of these death poems :/ The rhymes are overused and I feel like I've heard this a hundred times. Must be just me... 4/5 anyway

[ProfessorKC]

Ridiculous, really doesn't say anything but a bunch of words strung together meaning but not quite saying "I'm sad."

Ummm ... no.

[caracal_eyes]

One thing there's lots of here, is death and love poems, both of which often use at least a little chatspeak. But iti's not bad.

-Sunny-