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You used to keep in touch with me,
To sing with me, to be with me,
You went with no one else but me;
A special connection grown between you and I,
A connection that I thought it would never die.
But everything’s changed as time goes by;
Now that you’re gone in a blink of an eye
Like the star faded by the morning sky,
My heart’s crying everyday, every night,
Asking you to come back and hold me tight.
Before, you shed my countless tears,
Made me smile to cover my fears,
And listened up more than your ears;
No wonder why I’m longing for you more,
Though having you is possible no more.
Are you blind enough to see me crying?
Are you deaf enough to hear me calling?
Are you numb enough to feel I'm hurting?
Or maybe it's just me who don't anticipate
The time that love's battling with the Fate.
It may be too good to be true
To love you out of the blue;
But now, you love someone new
And sharing yourself with her tears me apart,
Knowing that I don't have a place in you heart.
- by sefairuhime1809 |
- Poetry And Lyrics
- | Submitted on 07/21/2008 |
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- Title: A Place In Your Heart
- Artist: sefairuhime1809
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Description:
I dedicated this poem to someone who used to be my friend...:'(
Anyway, this is the first poem I've done, and I was able to finish this so I can vent out my emotions.
And please, give comments not only to the content of my work, but also to the way I express my feelings. Pieces of advice are appreciated (not only for my benefit but for the benefit of the other Gaians who experienced or who are experiencing situation as same as mine). Thank you. - Date: 07/21/2008
- Tags: aplaceinyourheart
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Comments (7 Comments)
- Emo_Frenger - 07/22/2008
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wonderful!
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- coreycloud - 07/22/2008
- very very beautiful, great at expressing ur self and showing ur meaning. How much u loved ur friend its just great very great i love it a 99999999999999/10
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- numb_and_unloved - 07/22/2008
- it's....deep i love it
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- dolphinfin1105 - 07/22/2008
- ity made me want to cry
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- Luhvable - 07/22/2008
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Wow, I love this poem.
Nice job. - Report As Spam
- sefairuhime1809 - 07/22/2008
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@LivingDeadRomance: thanks for your support... smile
@Dragon Of Mourning: yeah, he's gone...without saying goodbye or without saying that he doesn't wanna talk to me anymore. sad - Report As Spam
- Dragon Of Mourning - 07/22/2008
- Man this is really good. But im sorry this guy is gone
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