war

• Artist: dark-blue-fallen-angel
• Description: This is a poem about the war i hate so much, tell me good,bad, i fail, i should stop writing,or i'm pretty good. feel free to leave mean and good comments.
• Date: 03/31/2009
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Bombing our children wont save yours,
so why we still fighting?
There's a lesson to be learned,
Hate wont give you your way
everyone's sad and tired
when will this fight seize the day?
our tears are falling
but you just keep bombing
shots are taring lives apart

What makes you hate us?
just because we think a different way?
how could your god possibly want this?

you kill our people
we save yours
what will stop this?

pain
hate
anger?

what stops them?

love
joy
kindness?

Cant we say sorry,
Cant we do anything?
Cant we find some way to bring our soldiers back?

Cant we stop the war in iraq?

Comments

[gerbils4]

The war is necessary. I hope you see that (just because you hate something does not make it unnecessary). But i like how appears to be a question to the iraqis. Keep going. USA! Hoora!

[panada0746]

keep writing and it's really good.

[vampireneko57]

You did awesome job.

[Miekka Kuoleman]

i agree on your idea about war and by the way KEEP WRITING, it wouldn't matter if you are good or not.