- "Why," she wondered as konan walked through the snow. "Why did he disert me." "My mom and dad where both murdered, i have no friends, and i trusted him. he was the first person i trusted, i loved him and he left me for someone else. Kona looked down at the rose in her hand it was white like the snow. "He gave it to me anliy a little while ago, when he left with the other woman. she started to cry, but these whern't ordinary tears. As they ploped down on the rose they left red splats. she was crying special tears, tears of betrayed love, tears of blood. her eyes glew red as she stared at the blood. "By now i would be drinking the blood he always ofered out of love, bu tnow..." she maniged to say as she fell to the ground dying of hunger as she froze to death. "wake up, wake up...," a voice was calling, but who's was it. she opined her eyes. "who are you," konan asked. "i'm a friend i saw what he did to you, and i promise i won't do that to you," the beautiful person said. "i'm like you i'm a vampire," he said sweetly. " i'll get to the point, will you be my lover?" "i will never disert you, i'll never let you go hungry, and i'll rewerd you for just being alive." the only thing she could think of saying is "...yes..." and she ment it. heart they sealed it with a kiss.
- by konan shirayuki |
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- | Submitted on 05/18/2010 |
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- Title: A vampire's bloody rose
- Artist: konan shirayuki
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an exert from a story i'm writing.
p.s. my avatar is the main character. - Date: 05/18/2010
- Tags: vampires bloody rose love
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Comments (4 Comments)
- PoisonousMoonlight - 06/17/2010
- Um paragraphs my dear, separate the paragraphs from a different character talking you changed from first person to third person, spelling, capitalization, use of periods...overall horrible plot line...if their was one...and a 2/5 for, shameful, effort
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- LbootsO123 - 05/19/2010
- very interesting but they dont even no each other and like they are already together
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- Profligates - 05/19/2010
- Gay as hell.
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- Holy Misty13 - 05/19/2010
- Cool
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