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Chapter 1:Addiction
my name is Jenna and i have been waiting for years for my dream moment to happen and right as i was thinking about it Meeting this very brave prince charming it happened it was him the boy of my dreams.His name was jeffery heart I loved him more then anything I has seen before.what was going on in my mind was if he was interested in me, my heart was beating as if I was bieng approached by a t-rex. What was going on in his mind was that if she liked him because he loved her as much as she loved him.
His heart was beating as if he was bieng approached by a truck, they were bolth mad for each other! But as she was about to say she loved him a school bell rang and she took off. The boy was descouraged and unhappy. Years have past sence that happened now i am in college and at the year of 25 and i still wish i can see him again. When i finally got out of school i saw something so frightening i coudint believe my eyes it was him again and hes............Gone to heaven above. It appears that he was driving and made a improper turn, i coundint stop crying for a month . I wish i could take that moment back and make him alive again, I knew what i had to do to see him again. I bought a gun from the nearest gun store i told the police about that one of the prisinors was my sun. So they let out the kid that was 20 and then left. I told the person to shoot me . With a touch of a trigger i was blown away. I emediately went up to the skies above and there he was standing right in front off me. I ran up to him and gave him a hug with all of my strenth then i looked in his eyes, he did the same back. but after that one stare he............... Kissed me and i did the same back we were made for eachother so we ran off to the sunset and danced to the clouds movement. I knew this was the strongest love yet and that we would be together forever and ever
End of chapter one chapter two coming soon biggrin
- by Helper no37 |
- Fiction
- | Submitted on 03/28/2009 |
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- Title: the two love birds
- Artist: Helper no37
- Description: this story is about two people that fall in love and become addicted to eachother and they cant stay away from eachother its worse then a addiction to smokind
- Date: 03/28/2009
- Tags: 1addiction 2marrage 3thegiftofbirth 4divorsed
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Comments (3 Comments)
- Little Milkflower - 12/03/2009
- It needs to hook someone in. Honestly (which everyone should be like) I almost changed it.
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- Helper no37 - 04/18/2009
- Ok here is the new and improved Chapter 1:Addiction hope you like it everyone that reads it goodbye and off to writing Chapter 2:marrage
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- meerodi - 03/30/2009
- It's not really that interesting of a start and, though I'm sure this could be a good story, maybe you could make the beginning more grrabbing.
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