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I was stabbed by something....no someone. I turned and gasped. There was no one there, yet, there was a sword in my back! It was not only in my back, not only was it in my back, but it was going through it. I can see the blade. What's going on? I should be dead by now. I thought. I shouldn't be alive still! How am I still lving? I then saw white. What is going on? All I see is white. I thought. I then felt another stabbing pain, no a lot of stabbing pain. "Stop it!" I yelled. "Stop stabbing me!" Immediately the pain stopped. But then a voice said. "You want it to stop? Wake up and it will stop." Wake up? I asked. "Yes, your asleep so wake up." But, I am awake, aren't I? "No, your sleeping. It may seem like your awake but your not. Now wake up!" The voice yelled. "But I'm already awake! How can I wake up?! My eyes aren't closed." I then felt something warm..and yet salty streaming down my face. I touched my face...but nothing was there. "Wake up." The voice said again. "I can't!" I yelled! And then all of a sudden I felt a shocking pain. Like a millon volts was going through me. I closed my eyes and inhaled sharply. Then I opened my eyes and found myself looking at a ceiling. I looked all around me, I could see a window which, showed a city and a lot of trees outside, it was sunny. "Finally you woke up." A voice said. That voice, it was the same voice as before! I thought. I sat up and that's when I noticed I was in a bed. I looked to where the voice was comming from. In a door way was a man with black hair. "Now, it may be akward since you have been sleeping for a long time." "Who are you? Do I even know you?" I asked. "Yes, you do know me. My name is Zane. Do you know who you are?" "No." I said while shaking my head. "Who am I? I know that I'm a girl, but what is my name?" I asked. "Your name is Rose." "What happened? Why am I here?" "You got into an accident." He said. "Really, tell me more." I said.
The End
- by Miss Odile |
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- | Submitted on 11/02/2008 |
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- Title: Am I truly awake? (short story
- Artist: Miss Odile
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Description:
Well this story just came randomly in my head....It probably doesn't even make sense. The story isn't long enough to actually make a summary for it sooo.
Warning:its a story with no ending... - Date: 11/02/2008
- Tags: coma random yuki strange noending
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Comments (2 Comments)
- Weary_Highelf - 11/27/2011
- I like it, it's hard to explain but the confusion created in the constant use of paradox kind of brings out the manufactured fear of the unknown that comes with death. Well done, five stars to you.
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- Miss Odile - 11/14/2008
- Ah..no comments.
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