• In the town of Glitchfield, people are usually in their houses after 7 o’clock at night. This town is an ordinary town. Nothing ever really happens here, people go on a basic schedule and kids play at specific times. It was a, more or less, boring town. One day, Danny Wolf moved into town. He wasn’t exactly a SOCIAL person. He would keep to himself and not allow anyone to be near him. He is a junior in Glitchfield senior high school. It was January seventh, his birthday. He got to his very first class and sat in the far back seat where he thought no one would talk to him. The teacher walks (walked) into the classroom and looked around to see what students had entered. As she looked about she saw a new student in a desk that was normally empty. She walked past the fourth row of desks and up the row before coming to a top and speaking softly to the young man. “Hello I am Ms Smith. Welcome to my math class. Your name is Danny right?” She had stood to the left side of the desk closest to the windows. Her hair was pulled back into a tight bun. She had been wearing a white satin button down shirt which had all but the top button done. Her skirt was a black tight form fitting business like skirt. She also wore a pair of black heels. Danny’s eyes had first caught the teacher from the corner of his eye turning looking the young teacher over before answering.
    “Yes ma’am.” He said. “Danny Wolf.”
    “Well Mr. Wolf, I hope you’re good at math.”
    “I do okay I guess.”
    “Well I guess I have to find out for myself now don’t I?” As she said that the bell rang and the rest of her math class was starting to walk in the classroom. Ms. Smith walked to the front of the room. “Okay everyone, let’s review what we’ve been learning for today. I’m going to put up a few problems on the board and I am going to select a few of you to try and solve them.” She put up five problems on the board and she walked back to her desk, “Let’s see now, I’ll choose Kathy, Steve, Greg, Jennifer, and Danny.” Everyone looked around the room and in confusion; (No) no one remembers a kid in class named Danny. Danny rose from his desk and everyone looked at him as he walked up to the board. Ms. Smith pointed at the problem she wanted Danny to complete, the other students came up to the board and they were all in front of their problems. (The other students walked up to their problems) Kathy, Steve, and Greg stood at the board looking over the problems and trying to figure it out. One by one, as they began to pick up their pieces of chalk, Danny and Jennifer had already completed their problems and stood still at the board. “Well clearly, we have two math-wizards instead of one.” Ms Smith spoke as Jennifer and Danny had both completed the problems set for them.
    Jennifer turned towards Danny saying (possible removal of saying) “Hi. My name is Jennifer Grey; I assume your name is Danny?” Danny just stood their looking at the problem he finished. Her face went from looking excited for meeting someone new to sad like (to sad, because) she was being ignored. The other three students were having trouble with their problems

    “If anyone wants to help them out you can.” Said Ms. Smith. Everyone just lowered their heads as the other three were sweating bullets. Danny saw the other three problems and pointed at one of them and moved his finger like as if he was doing them in his head.
    “If you think you can do it then do it. This is obviously the hardest problem that she put on the board.” Said Greg, Danny walked over to Greg’s problem and took his piece of chalk. He completed it in a few seconds. The other two looked like as if they were about to cry. In silence Danny walked over and completed Kathy’s and Steve’s problems then walked to his seat.
    “Well clearly Danny knows what he is doing, as does Jennifer, but I will give the three of you credit for at least trying.” They all sat down in their seats, Jennifer sat in front of Danny and the other three sat down on the other side of the room. Danny had his notebook out and was taking notes. (Possible new paragraph) Time past and it was almost the end of class. “Okay, I covered what I wanted to today, and we even did a little extra too. I guess you have the last five minuets to yourselves.” Said Ms. Smith.
    Jennifer turned around (to Danny again.) again and said, “Hey Danny, SoHow was your first period in a new school?” (Separating ideas, new paragraph) Her friend Cassidy sat next to Jennifer and turned to look at Danny. Danny just sat there giving them both a cold stare. (Glare?) (Separate paragraph) Jennifer had long blond hair and very bright blue eyes, brighter then normal blue eyes. She had a plain red tee shirt, blue jeans and a pair of white Nike shoes on. Cassidy had blood red hair coming down to her shoulders with hazel eyes. She had a Black shirt that said “TOUCH ME AND DIE” on and Black MUDD jean pants with Black sneakers that had no logo on it. (She had on a black shirt with the words, “TOUCH ME AND DIE.” She also wore a black pair of MUDD pants and a pair of black sneakers without any wording.)
    “Hi, my name is Cassidy. Nice to meet you.” She said as she extended her left hand for a hand shake. She was using her right hand to put on black lipstick. Danny just sat there looking at his desk trying to ignore everyone as much as possible. He took out his schedule and was looking (and looked at it to) at it to see where he was going next.
    Jennifer looked at his schedule and said (possible removal) “Hey, we have the same schedule for this year. That’s pretty cool. I can show you around if you want.” (Possible change of wording. Sounds off Edit? “The bell rang, and all of the students left the class. Jennifer and Cassidy followed him. Danny walked down the hallway. He wore a pair of blue jeans and a shirt that read, ‘I’m not opinionated, I’m just always right.” He wore a sweater that had a dragon on the back of it.)The bell rang and everyone started to leave the class. Danny was walking down the hallway in his blue jeans and his red shirt that said “I’m not opinionated I’m just always right” and he even had a sweater on that had a dragon on the back of it.
    “So I see that you like dragons?” Jen said.

    One of the students named Greg walked up behind him and pushed Danny to the ground. “Hey you, I don’t like that you showed me up in class today.” Jennifer and Cassidy went to see if he was alright as he started to get up (was alright. He stood back up.) He turned around with his hood on, covering his face. Greg looked at him with a smile and laughed at him. Little did he know that Ms. Smith was talking with another teacher, named Mr. O’Sullivan (nearby). The other students moved out of the way of Greg and Danny, and two other students grabbed Jennifer and Cassidy and pulled them out of the way.
    “Shouldn’t we DO something about this?” Mr. O’Sullivan asked Ms Smith. She grabbed (placed her hand on his arm) his arm and shook her head no.
    “Let’s wait and see how exactly this is gonna play out.” Greg lunged for Danny with his hand balled up into a fist. Danny just stood there as Greg’s fist came closer and closer, finally Greg stopped just as he was about to punch Danny in the face.
    “Oh, a tough guy huh?” Greg said as he backed up an inch, He went for another punch on Danny, Danny grabbed Greg’s right fist with his left hand and stopped him in his tracks, he tried to get his hand free but Danny just wouldn’t let go. Two seconds after catching Greg’s hand, Danny started to squeeze Greg’s hand and Greg started to feel the pain. In fact, it hurt so much that he fell to his knees. Another student ran up to Danny’s left side and went to punch him, Danny let go of Greg’s hand and grabbed the arm of the other student and flipped him over as Greg rolled out of the way almost in tears.
    Ms. Smith and Mr. O’Sullivan went to the middle of the crowed and Ms. Smith said “Okay everyone, break it up before we have to start handing out detentions” The other two kids let go of Jennifer and Cassidy and they went over to Danny.
    “Are you okay?” Asked Jennifer
    “Well of course he is okay, he just made Greg Avalon feel a s**t load of pain, now that was wicked” Said Cassidy.