Falling

• Artist: jePomme
• Description: ...?
• Date: 02/27/2010
• Tags: falling

Falling
Falling
I can't find my way back

Dying
Dying
I don't understand you

Crying
Crying
How did I get here?

Lonely
So lonely
I can still feel you

Comments

[Kaylea le Loup]

The simplicity of words made it easier to feel the complex emotions. While most people find it simple and well, suckish, I find it emotionally detailed, rhythmic (like CrescentVampireMoon said) and quite deep. I hope that is what you intended it to be, because that is how I precieved it. Simple at first glance, but much more complex and well thought out if you really disect it. If I could vote 5/5 smile

[CrescentVampireMoon]

I liked it. I liked the feeling that came from it. Even though some people might not notice the rythm, I saw one. It was awesome, but the poem shouldn't be named lonely, because the preson can still feel someone else. I believe 'Falling' is a perfect title. 5/5

[Aokina]

The point is, there's feeling in it. And we have to see from the poet's view; what is she feeling? Maybe she was feeling that the feeling had been drained out of her and put into a poem. Sure, it wouldn't win an award, but i think people should look at more than just the words and go deeper into the meaning of them.

[LiadenRogue]

you have it in fiction it's more poetry is what they meant. you may have just hit the wrong button. I give it a 2. just so you know. I like it but there was little rythm. one change could be at lonely. you could take out the word so. and it would actually be much better.

[jePomme]

Eh, I get that it's not very good. But how is it in the wrong section?
It says Poetry And Lyrics right next to where it says who it's by at the top.

[cocoliciousMochachino]

i agree with the last 2 comments sad sorry. its true