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Edward's Random Ramblings This is pointless... read it anyway. ^^


mekatra
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I wroted a poem. XD Tell me if you like.


Eyes close, heart begins to race
It feels so good in his embrace
I relax in his strong grip
His lips on my neck, I let a moan slip
I feel his fangs upon my skin
A gasp escapes as they sink in
It hurts but I crave his dark touch
This time it's diffrent... he's taking too much
My stregth fades, I offer my life
I see pain in his eyes, filled with strife
He didn't want this to happen to me
He had planned to set me free
This fangs slid out, just before death
Looked on in silence as I took my last breath
A single dark thought crossed his mind
I could become his kind....
A child, student and lover in one
Someone to share his world without the sun
The exchange was made, this life for new
All the pains of the chage suffred through
With fangs, claws and immortal sight
I lay by my master, now his goddess of the night.





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Saiis
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comment Commented on: Sun Dec 24, 2006 @ 04:34am
Truly beautiful. It suits you. I am clapping in much appreciation for such an extaordinary imagination.-_- Much love.


comment Commented on: Sat Dec 30, 2006 @ 06:47pm
ZOMG! Tis is my favorite one of yours.



Randumbly Oranginal
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Saiis
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comment Commented on: Sun Jun 03, 2007 @ 03:52am
My second time reading this poem, it gave me the chills. You are an excellent writer. I don't tell you that often enough. Keep this gift and you shall go far.

Much love,
-Saiis/other people (you know who...)-


comment Commented on: Tue Jul 10, 2007 @ 04:47pm
I'm reaidng back thropugh my journals ((Thanks to Mime XD)) And I found this... wow... heh... that was kinky. ^^ Heh.. allo



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