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+Bloodys Corpse+
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Lyrics of the Next....
Hey, I finished the lyrics and the notes but still need to record and to think of a title. lol.
Well... here ya go. cool


(intro riff...)

*first verse*
Until the sun picks for the millionth time again...
I will wait for you my love because I promised to stay.
So how long will it take to be with you some day?
I guess we'll never find out until the end...

(interlude riff)

I will never figure this out...
Because I could never let you down...
And that my life is wasting away...
For just an unlikeful cause...

(faster pace)

*second verse*
But death shall fear the presence of my unforgotten light.
The light of immortality which hell cannot pull me down.
Afloat my soul will rise to the heavens I must pray.
And with the guidance of your love, I will rise from the grave....

(guitar solo)

*third verse*
I wont give in to this hell we are living in.
My battle lances through, yet I bleed...
Deep breaths withold the thrust, embrace all the sins,
Ignite the flames of trust so we'll succeed...

*fourth verse*
Tell me that you wont leave.
Tell me that you'll believe.
Tell me that you will stay right by my side so I can sleep.

I dont want to lose you.
I dont want to bleed too soon.
I just want to hold u in my arms before my life is through...

(outro followed by a repitition of fourth verse)






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Eve Von Blood
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comment Commented on: Tue Apr 25, 2006 @ 09:09pm
Thats very cute.... *sniffle* hehe I'm first to comment YAYness!!!


comment Commented on: Thu Apr 27, 2006 @ 02:41am
Woah, I love this. I want to hear you sing sometime, mmkay? Gotta record something for meh!! Cause you're kool like that, lol.



VelvetVampire
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Whitefire_Fox
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comment Commented on: Wed May 03, 2006 @ 08:17pm
awe.
is this my song?
thats so cute.
i love it.
just dont bleed mh-kay?
love you<3
Dawnna.


comment Commented on: Fri May 12, 2006 @ 01:25am
Oh my god. I love this song!! <3



dookie_05
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VuxxNomica
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comment Commented on: Thu Jun 01, 2006 @ 06:16am
this is amazing! I can come up with chords, but comeing up with lyrics is hard, Im impress! 3nodding


comment Commented on: Tue Jun 27, 2006 @ 04:51am
That's...wow...beautiful. If I may suggest a title...what about "Trust in Blood"? That's just something that came to me...cliche but hey. Either way, I would love to actually hear this song instead of just reading the lyrics. ^-^



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Moon Charmer
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comment Commented on: Mon Jul 03, 2006 @ 12:43am
Theres so much meaning in that song. Its so beautiful. There's so many emotion's. Sad, love, amaziment...its truly a most meaningful song.


comment Commented on: Sun Jul 09, 2006 @ 04:01am
Here's the link for the song so u can hear it.

http://vids.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=vids.individual&videoid=774755377&n=2

Enjoy. wink



+Bloodys Corpse+
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tang-O
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comment Commented on: Sat Jul 22, 2006 @ 05:08pm
gonk


comment Commented on: Mon Sep 04, 2006 @ 07:59pm
its sad yet happy, awsume xd



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Checkered Zebra
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comment Commented on: Wed May 02, 2007 @ 02:43am
That's very good, I must say.

Sorry, nothing creative to say here. XD

It's just good.


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