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ArchKillah
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My first rap
My first rap... i got bored

I used to be Vocational
but now I am locational
livin' on the street
on my feet,
got no car, got no ride
but no one new how i was on the inside

raindrops fall like tears from your eyes
but now you know who i despise,
you never realized how much time your wasting
when its my blood your tasting
when it comes down to it, you never hesitate
but its in front of your face, you can't change fate

emo's what you called me and emo's what you said
but your the one who's better left off dead
I may hold this knife
but i got no life
so i dont care if your black or white
just help me get through the night,
i don't care of your straight or a gay
just help me pray.........

Falling through your eyes like a deep abyss
but its really like wanderin through never endin mist
cuttin through my skin,
just another sin
my shirt's stained
im always strained
from going insane
and from cuttin another vein





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Danzik1
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Fri Jan 01, 2010 @ 07:40pm


Well, it's good, but im being honest, killing yourself isn't really a topic for rap.Rap (What i think) Is to have something that would make the listeners bumb there heads to the song. I right the murder stuff because i get bored, it's all freestlye. If i were to accually right, it would be something pretty good. OFF TOPIC!
It's good, just not the best genre for rap. Maybe Rap Rock though. That can have everything XD


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